Story: The Maiden, the Fox, and the Demon (chapter 1)

Authors: Sylphion

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Chapter 1

Title: Chapter I

[Author's notes:

Bonus points if you know the Shinto references, and the meaning of Inari's name.

 

 There is useful information contained in the end notes for this chapter. If you have trouble following the Japanese references, such as what Inari is, the purpose of the shrine, etc, please look to those notes to illuminate yourself.

Also, this HAS NOT BEEN EDITED!

I dunno where Kai-chan went, though bed might be a good guess since it's 5 in the morning for her and I'm pretty sure she works tonight... so yeah. I'll send it her way when/if I hear from her (and I remember...), and if she decides to edit it, I'll replace the current version with a nice 'n' pretty edited version. Fair, right? Right? ... why're you looking at me like that... >_>

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The Maiden, the Fox, and the Demon

Chapter One: Dawn

 

            The sun dips below the horizon, leaving only a faint glow in the western sky. From among the trees, it’s almost as if there’s great fire just beyond the horizon, and to escape it, I must flee further into the forest. From the opposite direction the moon has risen, huge and full, already beginning to tint the world in the blue-white of an autumn twilight.

            As the light diminishes rapidly, the forest is alit with the pure moonlight, illuminating the world in a magic luminance. Several meters ahead of me, a young girl slows her hurried walk, afraid of tripping on an unseen hazard in the darkness. I likewise slow my pace, matching hers, as any good hunter will, my footsteps still soundless in the still night air.

 

            The night wears on and we head even deeper into the forest. The light from the moon is now the only illumination, and even that is obscured by the dense canopy, that only becomes denser the further into the forest we go. My eyes stay on her back, the pitch black of her uniform easily visible to me even in the low light. From here, I can even count the threads in her top. Her tea-colored hair, ruffled by a whisper-gentle breeze now and again, flutters delicately. A slight sheen of sweat covers the back of her neck, and I see a single drop run beneath her sailor collar and she shivers. I watch as goosebumps rise on her neck. With these eyes of mine, how is it then that I fail to notice something so critically important?

            She’s stopped dead in her tracks, and despite my slow pace, I’m closing the distance between us far too rapidly. I’m now hardly more than three meters from her, and should she turn around, I will surely be spotted… and that is unacceptable.

I halt abruptly, going as still as a statue in a moment.

Under my bare foot a long dead, dry branch snaps. In the silence of the deep forest, it echoes off the trees like a klaxon.

My eye twitches in annoyance at my own carelessness, and my breathing ceases as she whips her head around to look behind her.

With no other option, I cease to be.

Well, not entirely cease, per say, but to anyone looking upon the place where I stand, it would seem so. Such is the Kitsune’s gift of illusion; to show that which is not, and to hide that which is.

Safely hidden, I stand up straight, bow, and beg her forgiveness in but the barest whisper; I hate to deceive her, even if I want nothing more than the best for her.

            “Anno… hello? Is someone there?” She calls out softly, her voice trembling as much as her small, frail body.

I suppress the immediate urge to rush to her, scoop her in my arms and soothe her. My hands clench into fists, my long, sharp nails digging into my palms.

Stay stay stay stay stay…

I command myself mentally, using all my willpower to stop for running to her and assuaging her fear.

With no reply, she seems to hunch down, and look about furtively.

Damn it! She’s terrified. I should have been more firm, I should have been more honest. I want to be with you! I go with you everywhere else, why would you not let me accompany you now?!

“Inari…” She squeaks my name so softly, her hands clasped to her chest.

“Megu-chan…” I whisper automatically, my desperation plain even to my own ears.

Seconds pass as years, minutes as centuries, each one whittling my willpower away.

After 90 seconds, she turns around once more and resumes her pilgrimage. Her steps are faltering and hesitant, and she’s shivering.

I curse myself and my selfishness once more: if only I hadn’t been distracted by my own desires…!

 

            It takes a long time, an hour at least, for us to finish the trek. I’ve taken great care to make sure nothing else happens to frighten her, even going so far as to mask the presence of birds and raccoons as they move through the nearly pitch black trees.

            She stops again, suddenly, but with my failure still raw, I’m paying strict attention and stop along with her, silently.

            It seems we’ve arrived at a tiny Shinto shrine, nothing more than an offering altar and a single, worn and slightly rotting torri. I’m quite surprised by this turn of events. I hadn’t known that she knew of this shrine. It’s a bit embarrassing, really… after all, this is my shrine.

“So that’s why you wouldn’t let me have the botamochi you made today…” I mutter to myself, a bit put out. At least I could have had tea with them back at the apartment…

I sigh quietly. So troublesome…

I creep closer, taking greater care to stay quiet as I approach where she sits, in perfect seiza, before the altar, reciting Shinto prayers.

“Osuitsume-sama, please bless the forest and protect our humble village.”

I can’t help but smile; she really is a good girl. To think she would come all the way out to this old shrine to ask for a blessing from one such as I.

I feel my cheeks heat up a little.

Of course I would bless the forest, and even the village, if it’s you who asks, Megu-chan…

I sink back against a tree, being sure to keep quiet and that I’m on the side opposite Megu-chan and the shrine. Her voice is whisper quiet, but I can hear her clearly from where I am. She has a very soft, feminine voice, though it’s a bit low for a Japanese girl. It’s more beautiful than the most elegant music to my ears, though. If it’s because it’s Megu-chan, or because of what she is to me, I’m not sure and don’t much care; I could sit here and happily listen to her chant prayers for years.

Minutes pass, and her offering ceremony comes to a close.

She sets the botamochi on a thin sheet of rice paper, then stands, claps her hands together and bows.

A moment of pause and then she turns around and begins her walk home.

I see none of it, of course, being behind my tree as I am, but I hear every movement.

Ah, even her footfalls are pleasing to my ears… the uneven steps, the scuffing sounds as she nearly trips over something in the darkness.

You didn’t even bring a flashlight, did you?

I sigh. For someone as smart as you are, Megu-chan, you sure are a forgetful person.

I wait until she’s far enough that her chances of detecting me are well neigh zero, then stand and cross quickly to the shrine.

… those botamochi look delicious… a nibble right now wouldn’t be too bad, right?

A muffled thump and a small “Kyaaa!” informs me that Megu-chan has, finally, tripped over something.

No time to eat, I guess. I fold the paper around the botamochi taking an extra moment to ensure that none will fall out, and stride briskly towards my floundering Megu-chan. She is within sight in moments, and with a whispered incantation and a tiny expenditure of Ki, the world, for Megu-chan anyway, grows a bit brighter.

Not like daylight mind you, but enough that she can see by and avoid hurting herself.

She pauses and looks around, surprised. Then, in typical shrine maiden fashion, immediately claps her hands together, and bows towards the moon, thanking the Lunar Goddesses.

I’m a tiny bit irked, since they didn’t do a thing, but I guess it can’t be helped.

We resume walking, but at a brisk pace, much more to my liking than the laborious slog to the shrine.

It’s odd, though… the forest seems less familiar than it should… colder, somehow, and darker. There’s a definite reddish tinge to the light.

My neck and back muscles tighten in wariness and I recognize the aura of danger. I pick up my pace, moving closer to Megu-chan. I’m within a dozen meters now, and I can clearly make out that she’s shivering… violently.

“Auuu… it’s cold…” she whimpers to herself, wrapping her arms around her body and rubbing her arms, despite the long sleeves of the winter uniform. After a few moments, it’s cold enough for Megu-chan’s breath to leave a wisp of haze in the air. It’s far too cold for the beginning of autumn. That means… it’s getting closer.

            I move closer still, within a meter of her, impossibly risky. I use the entirety of my stealth, and become as her shadow, moving seamlessly with the wavering shadows and the whispering wind. I whisper another incantation, speaking as quickly as I dare least I mangle the words, and place a ward of concealment and protect upon Megu-chan. I wait with bated breath,

My body tenses involuntarily. It’s here, then.

Come! I command silently, and from the shadows of the forest, four black foxes appear, moving with unearthly speed and grace. They rush to Megu-chan’s side, as silent as the shadows they are borne of.

One scampers ahead, much smaller than the rest, and emerges from the foliage directly ahead of her, whimpering pitifully, and looking at Megu-chan with large, reproachful eyes.

Even I would be stopped for a moment by such a cute thing.

Megu-chan being Megu-chan, falls to her knees immediately and holds out her arms into which the fox leaps without hesitation.

“You poor thing!” She coos, clutching the fox close to her. “All alone on such a cold night… come with me, we can keep each other warm.” She says cheerfully, and the fox mews agreement.

Keep her warm, and safe. I order, and I feel a silent bow of assent.

‘It will be done as you say, master.’

 

And that’s when it finds us; an Oni.

It’s not a powerful Oni, not by any means. A typical ogre, if there is such a thing in this day and age. However, it’s not its power or type that has me on edge; its attention is fixed completely on Megu-chan.

It wants what every demon, spirit, and kami does.

Megu-chan’s blood.

[End notes:

So... yeah, forced cliff-hanger, sorry.

The need for sleep overrode the want of writing, and I seriously doubt I'll be able to go on from here without a second chapter, so it kinda just happened...

Anyway. Hope you enjoyed it. Let me know what you thought of it, ok?

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 Reference Notes ::SPOILERS::

 

Even thought no one has mentioned it, after some thought I think it’s prudent to explain this first chapter. I’m intentionally vague as to exactly who/what the narrator is throughout this chapter. My writing style introduces elements of a story in a very linear manner, with special attention paid to the point of view. In short, if the narrator doesn’t notice it, I won’t mention it. To me, that makes it feel a lot more like a first-hand account, which is what I’m aiming for in this case.

With that out of the way, I’d like to clarify this chapter, particularly the shrine, how it relates to Inari, and what Megu-chan is doing there. This is, naturally, a spoiler for this chapter.

 

Inari, the narrator, is a fox kami, that is, a kind of god or spirit. Unlike the western interpretation of “God”, kami are not omniscient, omnipotent or all-powerful. They can possess supernatural powers however, hence Inari’s illusion of invisibility. As an aside, kitsune (magical foxes) are supposedly mischief-makers who love to trick humans with illusions. The Fox Goddess is known as Oinari-sama, though without honorifics, her name is simple ‘Inari’. Albino foxes are said to be Inari’s messengers, though you’ll notice that I deviate from this belief in this story.

The shrine in the forest, the one Inari refers to as ‘my shrine’, is a Shinto shrine dedicate to the forest’s, and the city on the forest’s outskirts, patron deity, which is Inari. Megumi (Megu-chan) leaves a traditional offering of botamochi, rice balls filled with sweet red bean paste, which is said to be a favorite of foxes (as well as fried tofu). Megumi, as a shrine maiden, is expected to ensure that the local deities receive due respect in the form of prayers and offerings. It is implied within the story that the shrine Megumi visits is an older shrine that is not well known. This is meant to show her responsibility towards her duties as a miko and to impress upon the reader that she is aware of the forest’s kami.

 

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