Story: The Craziness of Love Hina! (chapter 9)

Authors: Anime Lover

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Chapter 9

Title: 9.Surprise! Surprise!

[Author's notes: This fic tells how Shinobu and Naru got involved in the Shinobu's Horny Concoction series]

Disclaimer: I don't own Love Hina or any of its character's, this is
just a work of fiction.


Naru had recently decided to make herself a sandwich and walked to the
kitchen to do so. A few minutes into making her snack, Naru saw Shinobu
walk in, who appeared a bit surprised at seeing her.


"Huh, what is it Shinobu?" asked Naru.

"Um, it's nothing..." replied Shinobu.

Naru could see that the smaller girl was obviously nervous about
something, there was also a shade of red on her cheeks.

"... I'll just come back later." states Shinobu.

"Shinobu wait, what did you come in here for?"

"I-It's nothing, really."

"Come on, what is it?" urges Naru smiling.

"Well, I, uh... came to get a banana..." replies Shinobu appearing to
blush redder and not making eye contact with Naru.

"Oh, here then..." states Naru pausing making her sandwich to pull a
banana from it's group near her and handing it to Shinobu, who takes

but after a moment...

"Um, this isn't a good one." states Shinobu.

"Not a good one? What are you taking about? I picked the ripest looking

"N-Nevermind! I'll just go!" quickly replies Shinobu before hurrying
out of the kitchen.

"Huh? That, was pretty weird..." states Naru to herself.

A few moments later, when Naru is putting away the mayo and knife she
used, Motoko walks in.

"Oh, Naru, is something wrong with Shinobu?"

"Huh, no, not that I know of, why?"

Motoko then opens the refrigerator as she replies, "I just saw her and
her face was pretty red."

"Oh, She came in here acting a little funny."

"Oh? How so?" asks Motoko taking a can of pop from the frig.

"She wanted a banana, I gave her one then she was it wasn't a good one,
but I gave her the best one I saw."

"Maybe she wanted one that wasn't totally ripe yet." states Motoko.

"But why? If a banana's not ripe yet, it's kinda firm."

There was a moment of silence between the two friends before they
quickly gained a reddening on their cheeks.

"Noooo..." states Naru in a suspicious-like manner. "Shinobu
wouldn't... would she?"

"I... don't know..." replies Motoko. "It's possible..."

"You really think Shinobu would use, a banana?"

"Possibly, I don't think she'd be able to buy a... you know..."

"Yeah, I know."

Motoko then smiles.

"Hey, whaddya say we got to her room and 'accidentally' catch her?"

"What!? You can't be serious."

"Yeah, let's doing it, then, instead of just the two of us, we can have
cute little Shinobu."

"Hmmm, I don't know..."

"Come on, If she's using bananas, she herself is ripe to join us in our
little activities." states Motoko.

"Fine, I'm in, but under one condition."


"We don't force ourselves onto her, after all, if we're right, she's
going to be pretty embarrassed when we walking in on her." states Naru.

"OK, fine by me, if she freaks out, we'll stop."

"Good, let's go..."


Naru and Motoko quickly head to Shinobu's room, once right outside her
door, the two press an ear to the door, soon hearing the obvious moans
of a young girl in pleasure.

'We were right!' whispers Motoko smiling nearly ear to ear.

'But we don't know if she's really using that banana.' replies Naru.

'Hehe, there's only one way to find out.' whispers Motoko repressing a
giggle. 'You ready?'

'Yeah... Whoa! hold on a sec!' replies Naru before realizing something.


'What's our story?'

'What do you mean?'

'Well, we have to make up a reason as to why we're just going to barge
in on her.'

'We don't need a story, now stop stalling and lets go!'

Immediately after Motoko finished her statement, she quickly opened the
door. Naru made the second action by quickly stepping into the room
followed by Motoko, who closed the door behind her.

"AH!" exclaimed a nude Shinobu who lay on her back on her bed.

Naru and Motoko saw the completely peeled banana in Shinobu's right
hand, she also held the fruit in-between her lower lips a small
distance. However, she quickly removed it upon seeing her two friends
walk in and immediately sat up trying to cover herself.

"My Goodness Shinobu..." states Motoko smiling as she walked to the
girl, followed by Naru.

"So that's what you 'really' wanted the banana for." adds Naru.

"W-W-What are you to doing here!?" staggers out Shinobu red all over.

"Shinobu..." begins Motoko leaning over the girl and placing back to a
laying position on her bed and moving her left hand from over her small
breasts, then to Shinobu's shock, her right hand from her crotch. "Your
such a dirty girl."

Shinobu gasps in further shock upon feeling Naru spreading her legs,
who is at the girl's feet on the bed.

"Wow, Motoko you should see this, She's pretty wet down here."

"W-What's going on!? What are you doing!?" asks Shinobu.

"Just relax Shinobu, Naru and me are gonna make you feel real good..."
states Motoko. "Hehe, you don't need to use any more banana's.

"What?" asks Shinobu.

As Shinobu asked this, both Naru and Motoko saw the younger girl's
tensing stop, meaning she stopped resisting for the moment.

Shinobu then flinched and gasped moments later, feeling Naru's tongue
licking at her young lips.

"Hehe, you taste like banana." states Naru stopping momentarily only
seconds into it.

Naru quickly re-started.

"Hey, Shinobu, let me see that banana for a sec..." states Motoko
releasing Shinobu's left arm and grabbing the fruit from her hand.

"W-Why are you t-two doing this?" asks Shinobu under the pleasure of
Naru's tongue.

"Hehe, we're doing it because we like you, we'd like you to join us

"Wha- !"

Shinobu is suddenly silenced as Motoko gentle placed the 'used' end of
the banana into Shinobu's mouth.

"This is why you use banana's huh?" asks Motoko smiling.

Motoko gently inserts the fruit halfway into the younger girl's mouth.

"After your done, you just eat it, other than the peel, there's no

Motoko then began to calmly move the banana up and down into Shinobu's
mouth, noticing moments later, Shinobu didn't seem to resist this
action, Motoko even felt the small pressure of Shinobu's tongue.

"It looks like you like that huh?"

Shinobu only moaned, but just a few seconds later, Naru stopped her
licking and looked up at Shinobu.

"It looks like she's kinda into it too, I stopped licking but her eyes
are still closed."

"Hehe, are you thinking of a certain someone?" asks Motoko grinning.

Shinobu's eyes then quickly opened.

"Oh you naughty little girl you." states Naru also grinning.

"And I bet we know who it is..." states Motoko sing-songly before she
completely withdraws the now thoroughly lubricated banana from
Shinobu's mouth.

"Say his name Shinobu!" giggles Naru.

"I-I can't..." replies the girl.

"Why can't you? It's just a name." states Motoko smiling.

"Hehe, I think Shinobu want more of that banana." adds Naru smiling.

"Yeah, she likes this banana huh? Sucking it too."

"Oh really? There was sucking action too?" asks Naru.

"And tongue too."

"Heh, speaking of tongue, I better get back to what I was doing."
replies Naru lowering her lips to Shinobu's own puffy ones. "Oh, look
who came out to play." states Naru smiling at Shinobu's now exposed
clit. "Let's give it a little attention..."

"AH!" gasps Shinobu with her mouth wide open.

Shinobu also clamps her thighs together onto Naru's head, who calmly
separates her tensing legs with her hands.

Motoko promptly re-inserts the banana into the young girl's mouth,
muffling her moans.

"With Naru licking your little clit, your not going to last much longer
are you?" asks Motoko.

Shinobu slowly shakes her head no.

"Well, I guess I better get me some action too..." smiles Motoko before
removing her hand from the banana and placing her mouth over it and
down to kiss Shinobu.

Motoko then moves her right hand down Shinobu's body near Naru's head,
but rests her fingers on Shinobu's pubic region and starting to caress
the area. Motoko could tell Shinobu liked this from stuttering that
occurred in her moaning.

It really wasn't long before Shinobu seized up, biting through the
banana, thus breaking the kiss as she emitted a muffled moan of

Naru was quickly surprised with fluid streaming out of Shinobu's body
by way of her urethra. The sudden, forceful and concentrated stream to
the face initially shocked Naru, but she recovers quick enough to place
her mouth over Shinobu's orgasmic urethra and suck up any and all of
Shinobu's sweet ejaculate.

Since the banana was now separated, Motoko simply began eating what was
left in her mouth.

Shinobu's orgasm soon died out and she began recovering while Motoko
looked at Naru's nearly drenched face.

"Heh, looks like she squirts." states Motoko.

"Yeah, pretty forceful too."

Motoko then looks back to Shinobu and smiles.

"Well, your now the third member in me and Naru's little group."

"But that doesn't mean we're totally done with you yet. Hey Motoko,
let's see how many times we can make little Shinobu climax." states

"Ohh, that sounds fun!"

"W-Wait a minute you guys!" whines Shinobu. "I'm too tired."

"Don't worry." states Motoko.

"Yeah, all you gotta do is just sit lay there..." adds Naru descending
her lips between Shinobu's legs again, while Motoko places her mouth to
Shinobu's right nipple.

"AH! Y-You guys!" comes Shinobu's gasping voice through her door, where
Haruka has been purposely listening in on nearly the entire scene...


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