Story: Undisciplined (all chapters)

Alex Jones has been a recruit in the army for only 6 month. Her parole officer thought the army would do her some good, help her disciplinary problems, even dealing with her resistance to authority figures. He also thought the army was the best place to resolve her lack of anger management control. It would be the best place to straighten out this 23 year old girl. If it fails she would be back to gaol for a long time.

Private Jones eyes opened with the sounds of whistles going off. She starts to rise and looks at her clock reading 4.55am. She watches the other girls scurry for their clothes and throws hers on while rushing out to form the line.

Outside the sun was trying to rise and pacing in front of the girls was Sergent Stacy ‘the bitch’ Burke. She was a fit woman nearing 40 and had the voice of a machine gun that cut straight through everyone.

“EVERY GOD DAMN FUCKING MORNING I WAIT. I WAIT FOR YOU BITCHES TO GET OUT HERE AND FORM A LINE. IT TAKES YOU 10 MINUTES TO DRAG YOUR LAZY ARSES OUT AND INTO THIS LINE.” She walks closer to the girls examining them all closely. “THIS IS NOT A BEAUTY PAGEANT LADIES, THIS IS NOT A FUCKING HOLIDAY CAMP. THIS IS THE ARMY”

“YES MAAM” choruses the group

Burke stops in front of one solider and looks her over “Do you find something amusing Private Jones”

“not particularly” she says looking at her Sergeant

“Eyes front soldier I don’t remember giving you permission to look at me. Then tell me something Jones why are you always the last one to line up in the mornings eh?”

“Well I guess it could be cos my bed is the furthest from the door maam.” Her flat reply

Burke scowls. “AFTER ALL THIS TIME STILL THE WISE ASS, DOWN AND GIVE ME 50” she yells into Jones’s ear “AND LET ME HEAR YOU COUNT”

“Yes maam” and Jones drops and starts push ups

Sergent Burke continues to berate her troops before returning to Private Jones. She puts her foot under Jones chest and rolls her over

“So what is your count Private Jones” orders Burke

“45 maam” answers promptly

“Well I didn’t her the last 20, so again give me 50 and call them out LOUD.”

Jones started counting again and Burke dismisses her troops for breakfast. She waited until Jones and completed and got to her feet.

“DO WE HAVE A PROBLEM PRIVATE JONES” yells Burke

“No maam”

“well lets keep it that way. Dismissed” barks the Sergeant

Private Jones salutes and leaves.

Jones sits at the table with the rest of the girls and digs into her breakfast. Some girls laughed and one spoke up

“Hey Alex so how many does that total to now”

Alex laughed “I dunno probably 500”

Another girl spoke “more like 5000, Alex when are you going to learn”

Alex looked over and smiled at her good friend Jo.

Jo Lim started out same time as Alex, they had become good friends, and although Jo tried to keep her on the straight and narrow she knew that Alex was untameable and unobtainable.

“the bitch has it in for me Jo I tell you” whines Alex

“well of course she does, you act like as she put it a wise ass” puts arm around shoulder and hugs

Alex laughs “bite me” she teases

Jo laughs and thinks to herself “Hmmm I wish”

Early afternoon the girl’s were in the motor pool servicing the 30 vehicles. The music was up loud and the girls where singing and having a good time. Alex had her jacket off and tied around her waist, she was dancing around while smoking a cigarette.

The music was shut off instantly and someone yelled out “FALL IN”

“YOU WANNA DANCE, DO IT IN YOUR OWN TIME.” Barks Burke “YOU MUST BE THE WORST BUNCH OF SHIT HEADS I’VE EVER HAD” and stops in front of Alex

“any reason why you are out of uniform and smoking during hours soldier”

“No maam”

“ TIDY YOURSELF UP NOW” yells Burke

Alex puts her jacket on and butts out her cigarette

Burke looks at the vehicles “Have all these vehicles been serviced to regulations”

“Yes maam” they chorused out confidently

“really” and inspects the vehicles

“Does that include the swapping of tyres” she asked quickly

“Yes maam” came one solitary voice

Burke looked around and noticed Jones had closed her eyes. “Private Jones front and centre”

Alex walked out two steps.

Burke walks behind Alex and faces the other girls “Jones is the only one who thinks these tyres have been changed. I say that Jones is a compulsive liar and therefore don’t believe her.

Burke moves to front of Alex and stares at her “Isn’t that right Private”

Alex didn’t flinch

“I SAID ISN’T THAT RIGHT PRIVATE JONES” she barked to her face

“in your opinion maam” replies Jones flatly

Jo rolls her eyes and waited for it

“it is my opinion and my opinion is law to you” she growls

“fine” growls back Alex

Jo gasps but remained still

Burke moves to Jo “DID YOU SAY SOMETHING LIM” she asked

“No maam, just swallowed a bug” she replied

“Well it seems Jones’s bad influence is rubbing off on you all. Not only do I have the worst bunch of bitches, but are all liars as well.

Burke points to the girls except Jones “YOU WILL ALL CHANGE EVERY GOD DAMN TYRE ON ALL THESE VEHICLES.”

“Yes maam” they chorused

“Private Jones fall back into formation

Alex complies and Burke gets in her face. “after you have helped your team change the tyres you will wash every single vehicle inside and out before you go do dinner, UNDERSTOOD”

Alex stood firm “yes maam” she gritted out

It was evening and the girls were in their dorm cleaning their uniforms and enjoying the free time they had.

Alex put her stuff away in afoot locked and kicked it hard “fucking bitch” she cursed to nobody

Jo walks over to her “well stop letting her bait you all the time. Just accept that she’s the one in charge” Jo laughs

“ha… she is so asking for it” throws rest of her clothes into the locker by her bed “She can only hide behind those fucking stripes for so long then….”

“then what Jones” came a gruff voice

All girls jumped up to attention including Alex

“nothing maam” said Jones lightly

“no please enlighten me as to what you would do if I wasn’t wearing these strips” looking down at her shoulder that proudly displayed her position

“she was just blowing off steam” pipes up Jo

Burke went to Jo and looks her over “Letting Private Lim fight your battles now Jones”

“No maam” gritted Alex

“hmm” returning to Alex “so you think you can take me Private Jones” getting up close to her

Alex didn’t say a word, she held her breath trying to stay calm

“Nothing to say, I take that as a sign of fear” she laughs

“It is a court marshal offence to hit a superior officer.” Pauses Jones “even if she does deserves it maam” finish off louder.

“You wanna have a shot at the title I take it” baits Burke

“I’d like to stay out of gaol maam”

“yes you are down to your last notch. Well you know what Jones it’s your lucky day, I’m going to let you have a crack at me. What you say to that”

Alex didn’t have a reply instead looked at Jo

‘Don’t look at Lim, I’m asking you, do you want to have a crack at me Private”

With as little as a quick breath “absolutely”

“well then, I’ll just remove my jacket so my stripes won’t distract you”

Burke turns away and takes her jacket off leaving her in a black t’shirt only. She turned back only to wear an unexpected fist across her face that sent her onto the next bed. Alex was quickly over Burke and punched her again, splitting the sergeant’s lip.

The crowd started cheering and Jones raised her fist again but Burke slammed her elbow into Alex’s stomach winding her slightly. She got up and threw Alex hard against a locker, the impact denting it. Burke laid a fist into Alex face followed by another in her stomach. Alex doubled gasping for air

Alex saw Burk bringing up her knee, wrapped her arms around Burk and pushed across the other side of the room into another locking damaging it She sent a fist at Burke who defended . Burke grabbed at Alex and forces her against the locker, followed by a punch to Alex’s face. The blow had opened up Alex’s lip.

Burke grabbed Alex and threw her to the floor, clutched her shirt and punched her in the face breaking her nose, blood now covering much of Alex’s face.

Burke raises her fist but held it still as she noticed Alex held up her hand to shield the pending blow. Burke lowered and let Alex go, which she collapsed to the floor. Burke bends down and dragged the battered Alex to her feet and looked at her bloodied face. Convinced Alex had got the message she then pushed her back against Jo who caught her.

“Private Lim get Private Jones cleaned up and as for the rest of you the show is over. Get some sleep” Burke eyes Alex off and then leaves with a wry smile on her face.

Most of the girls were in bed and Jo sat on Alex’s bed “hey you ok” noticing Alex’s puffy face

“I’m going to kill her, I going to kill Burke” growls Alex

Jo groans “well you let it go before she kills you. Now sleep.” Pushes Alex down and pulls up the blanket

The dorm was a sound of sleeping girls. Alex eyes wide open sits up and goes to her foot locker. She pulls out something and puts it into the back of her pants and leaves the room quietly

She carefully and quietly opens the window to a cabin and slips inside. She moves slowly leaning up against the wall. She peers around and sees the sleeping person.

Alex slips down onto her stomach. She removes her hunting knife from its cover that was stored in the back of her pants and holds it between her teeth. She crawls quietly towards the bed and the sleeping occupant. She listens to the breathing person and quickly springs on top, a hand over the mouth and the knife held to the throat.

Burke’s eyes open wide and fixes on Alex with surprise.

“Not so tough now… not so clever.” Hissed Alex through gritted teeth. “I may be not be a good soldier but I managed to get to you. You didn’t hear a fucking thing” her hatred spitting over Burke.

Burke feeling the cool steel blade against her didn’t dare move

Alex takes a sharp breath “I can’t go back to gaol, I won’t let you send me back” Alex shakes and raises the knife into the air above Burke.

Burke closes her eyes and Alex brings the knife down hard.

Burke opens her eyes and looks over to the bedside table, jammed firmly in it was Alex’s knife. She looked up at Alex who was still shaking.

Alex looked down on Burke not sure what to do next.

Burke felt sensation ripple through her, she half sat and looked into Alex’s eyes. She quickly wrapped a hand around the back of Alex’s neck and pulled her hard until their lips met. Burke forced her tongue deeply into Alex's mouth, exploring her. A slight groan left Alex who didn’t fight back Burke’s counter attack.

Alex moves from Burke’s lips onto her neck kissing down, nuzzling into her. Burke lay back down and pulled Alex still kissing her passionately, her body in need of satisfying, her fear turned quickly to arousal.

Alex sat back up, still straddling her Sergeant, Alex lets her hand caresses up and down her body, tugging Burke’s shirt free from her pants.

Burkes expression had softened as her hips lifted slightly.

Alex takes her knife from its wedged state and lowers the flat side down along Burke’s chest, moving it until it reaches the base of her night shirt. Burke watched intensely at what her soldier was going to do next, still uncertain of Jones’s full intentions.

Alex grabs Burke’s shirt and nicks it with her knife, then like butter being spread she let it slide up splitting the shirt in two, her breasts released. Burke caught her breath as she felt the cool flat steel rub across her chest, flattening over her breasts. Burke feeling tortured sexually still didn’t move fearing one slip could give her unwarranted mastectomy

Alex put the knife back on bedside table and lowered down kissing Burke’s chest, moving down until she devoured one of Burke’s voluptuous breasts, suckling at the nipple greedily.

Burke let a slight moan slip as she felt other areas of her body igniting.

Alex licked at Burke’s stomach before dragging back to the other breast. Her hand starts to move between Burke’s legs when Alex sat up immediately.

Alex froze when reality hit, she’s gone from wanting to kill her sergeant to sexually assaulting her. Alex started to stutter then looked at the door for a quick exit.

Burke read her Private’s thoughts but wasn’t going to let her soldier leave just yet.

“Don’t you dare think about leaving Jones” she hissed

Alex looked stunned “ummm”

“A court-marshal would be the least of your problems if you step out this room without completing your mission.” She warned

Jones nodded in acknowledgement and resumed down kissing and licking to Burke’s waist, slowly tugging off the pants leaving her fully exposed. Alex swallowed nervously as she ran her fingers through Burke’s dark hair.

Burke lets out a hiss as she feels Jones part her juicy lips and sink down between her.

Alex licked around, taking in all she could. Alex parted her lips wider and sinks her tongue at Burke’s opening

Burke finally released a sound of approval and placed a hand on Alex’s head.

Alex had now found her sergeants weakness and let her tongue move over Burke’s opening.

Burke let a whimper of frustration.

Alex reached for her knife and Burke became nervous all over again. Burke watched the knife and finally relaxes back down as she saw Alex licking the rounded handle of her knife. Burke instinctively widened her legs.

Alex pushes the handle into Burke slowly allowing her a moment to adjust. Burke accommodates most of its length easily.

Burke grasped the sheets either side of her bed, panting each time Alex pushed the handle in. Her toes curling each time the thrust went deeper.

Burkes started to tremble and spoke “More” her voice wavering as her climaxed neared

Alex held the knife handle deep inside and opened up Burke’s wet lips. Alex presses against her swollen clit, trapping and flicking it with her tongue. She could feel Burke giving in and applied more pressure.

Burke bucked up into Alex, a slight cry escaping Burke as her orgasm was freed.

Alex carefully removed the knife handle from Burke and returned it too the bed side table. She could feel Burke pulling her up and moved up next to. Burke was still breathing heavily, body still shuddering.

Burke’s voice trembling slightly “you did good Jones”

Jones rested her head on Burke’s shoulder, aware that it was the first compliment she had received from her sergeant. Alex felt something firmly trapping her to Burke’s body but her thoughts dissolved to nothing more.

Alex was gently being shaken “Jones….wake up…”

Alex murmured, she felt something press to her ear

“Alex you have to go.”

Alex eyes flickered open to the sound of her name and sat upright. Burke was still lying on her back, shirt torn apart. She looked over at the clock reading 4:20am. She looked back at Burke who seemed quite calm.

“you need to go now” re-affirmed Burke

“oh ok…. Yess maam” picks up her knife and leaves sergeant Burke’s quarters.

Back in the dorm Alex puts the knife away and collapses onto her bed, closing her eyes for a moment.

“Alex get up, come on you’ll get it” a voice yells at her

Alex groans and feels Jo pulling her to get up. Jo looks at her “jeezus you look like shit, when did you fall asleep in your uniform.

“I ummm” still asleep “dressed”

“forget it Alex no time cmon” she drags Alex who stumbles as they scramble outside

The troops line up with Burke pacing up and down until they all were present.

“ABSOLUTELY PATHETIC. WE MIGHT AS WELL SURRENDER TO THE ENEMY BECAUSE YOU ALL CAN’T GET YOUR ARSES OUT OF BED.” She continues up the line walking passed Alex. “DO WE SURRENDER” she yells

“NO MAAM” yelled back the girls

Alex trying to desperately to keep her eyes open. Jo elbows her awake causing Alex to briefly stagger off balance. Burke walks up to Alex

“Is there any particular reason why you are out of formation Private Jones.”

Alex stepped back dare not looking at Burke “umm no maam” she says lightly

“I can’t hear you Private Jones.”

“NO MAAM”

Burke looks over Jones. “Your uniform is a disgrace Jones. It looks like you’ve been sleeping in it.”

“I …I” Alex couldn’t say a thing, it was the first time the sergeant had ever intimidated her.

“I will try and do better” she offers

Burke’s eyebrow rose “well that’s good to know, now down and give me 50 Jones”

Alex grimaced and got down for push ups. She was so exhausted, finding it near impossible to lift her own body off the ground.

“On your feet Jones” called Burke

Alex collapsed at first then got to her feet. She looked out corner of her eye noticing the rest had been dismissed and her sergeant was pacing. Burke returned and Alex turned her eyes to the front sensing the awkwardness.

“Jones” started Burke

“Yes maam” replied Alex

Burke lowered her tone “you look like hell Private”

“Yes maam” still not meeting Burke’s intense stare.

“Jones….” Paused Burke “get some rest and I will see you at target practice this afternoon”

“I’m fine maam” defiant Alex

A smirk appeared on Burkes lips “you’re a liar Jones…. And not a very good one either”

Alex tried to hold her grin “Yes maam” she lightened her tone

“You are ordered back to your kennel Jones until this afternoon do I make myself clear”

“yes maam” replies Alex

“dismissed”

Alex salutes and turns to leave

“oh one more thing Jones”

Alex half turns “yes sergeant”

“tonight…….bring your pistol”

Alex smirks “yesss maaam” she replies and heads off to bed.

The end