My Angel (part 1 of 5)

a Original Fiction fanfiction by Nathan Warford

AUTHOR'S NOTES: This is my first submission to ShoujoAi.com, so please 
send me some feedback about the story. I have gotten good reviews on 
another site, but every bit of feedback helps. I used to write lemons 
just for the hell of it, but this time, I am hoping that this story will 
get the attention of some producers that are looking to acquire a script 
from an aspiring, young yuri fan. If anybody is interested in helping me 
get some of my yuri lemons made into hentai series, please drop me a 
line. If not, at least enjoy the story :)

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Laura was in an ancient Egyptian chamber. She was unable to see anything 
in the darkness, but she knew that she was bound to the wall by chains 
tied around her hands and feet. She then realized that they were not 
chains, but snakes. The blonde screamed in fright. Laura had always 
hated snakes. She tried to break free but she could not escape the 
strength of the snakes that were holding her to the wall.

Laura noticed something moving in the darkness. "Who's there?" the 
frightened woman demanded an answer. "What do you want?"

"I want you," the figure said as it approached Laura. As the figure came 
within several meters of Laura, the woman could tell that it was a man, 
probably in his late twenties. He was dark skinned like an Egyptian and 
spoke in an ancient tongue that Laura should not have been able to 
understand.

"Me?" Laura asked as she continued to struggle with no avail. "What do 
you want with me?"

"I have chosen you to bare my son." When the man was several feet away 
from Laura, he started transforming. His arms and legs disappeared, his 
head grew long, his skin turned into scales, and his neck extended to 
form a hood. Laura cried in fright at the giant cobra that the man had 
transformed into. The gigantic snake coiled its head and then lunged 
toward Laura with its fangs bared.

The blonde woke up with a start. She looked around the dark room for a 
moment, making sure that what she had just experienced was just a dream. 
She was in her king-sized bed in a hotel in Cairo, Egypt. The bedside 
clock read 6:54 AM. Laura looked out the sliding glass door to see the 
black sky turning a dark shade of blue. There was a figure standing on 
the balcony outside that Laura recognized as her partner, Denise. Laura 
got out of bed, went to the bathroom to relieve herself, put on her blue 
bathrobe and walked out to the balcony to join her friend. Denise was 
wearing her red bathrobe. "Good morning, Denise," Laura said, wrapping 
her arms around the brunette.

"Good morning, Laura," said the English woman. "You ready for a day of 
exploration?"

"You bet I am!" cried the American. "I've dreamed about this for years. 
Visiting Egypt, exploring the tombs, learning what life was like in 
ancient times."

"Yeah," Denise agreed. "It's truly amazing being here in Egypt." Laura 
and Denise watched as the first rays of sun started reflecting off of 
the pyramids of Giza and the Nile River. "Wow. That's beautiful."

"You're beautiful," said Laura. Denise turned to look at Laura and then 
smiled at her blue-eyed lover. Denise turned the rest of her body to 
face Laura and they kissed. Laura felt Denise sucking on her lips and 
her hands roaming her body. The American girl reciprocated her British 
lover's actions. She extended her tongue into Denise's mouth and the 
brunette sucked fervently on it, causing Laura to moan into her lover's 
mouth.

Without breaking her kiss with Laura, Denise opened the sliding glass 
door and pushed her blonde lover back into the room. Denise broke the 
kiss long enough to push Laura onto the bed. She then laid herself down 
on top of her lover and kissed her aggressively on the lips again. The 
brunette found the sash that kept Laura's bathrobe from falling open and 
undid it, exposing the blonde's B-cup breasts and trimmed pussy. Denise 
got up onto her knees and laughed as she took off her red bathrobe, 
revealing her own naked body. After giving her C-cup breasts a light 
squeeze to entice Laura, Denise brought her head down to the blonde's 
chest and started sucking on Laura's left nipple. The American woman 
moaned loudly and arched her back, pushing herself further into Denise's 
experienced mouth. Her nipple was very sensitive and became hard and 
erect almost instantly to Denise's touch. After several moments, Denise 
released Laura's nipple and started paying the same attention to her 
right nipple. Again, Laura moaned loudly and arched her back as her 
right nipple became erect.

After pleasuring Laura's nipples for several minutes, Denise brought her 
mouth back to Laura's and dove into her blonde lover's mouth. Both women 
drove their tongues as deep as they would go into each other's mouths 
while they started squeezing and fondling each other's soft breasts. 
They both moaned as they got each other more and more aroused. "God," 
Denise said between kisses. "Laura, you make me so hot." Another kiss. 
"I want you so bad."

"I want you too," Laura said after another kiss.

Denise broke the kiss and turned around so that she was on top of Laura 
in a sixty-nine position. "Wow," said the English woman. "Look at you, 
Laura. You're so wet!"

"You always do that to me," Laura said. Denise grabbed Laura's hips and 
dove into her American lover's hot muff. Laura cried in bliss as Denise 
started going down on her. Laura, too, grabbed a hold of Denise's hips 
and brought her face to her lover's shaved pussy. Both girls ate each 
other out like cats in heat. Denise was more aggressive than usual that 
morning. In the six months that she and Denise had been lovers, Laura 
had never seen the English woman so aroused. It was such a turn-on for 
the American.

Both women moaned and sighed in pleasure as they went down on each other 
zealously. Their hips had started rocking to each other's ministrations, 
grinding their pussies against each other's faces. Denise squeezed 
Laura's ass cheeks, making the blonde cry out in pleasure. Laura pulled 
Denise's pussy further into her face and lapped at her cunt even more 
vigorously. "Oh, yeah!" Denise cried as her lover increased the 
attention on her pussy.

Denise decided to take it up to full power and started sucking hard on 
Laura's erect clitoris. "Holy shit!" Laura screamed as Denise attacked 
her clit without mercy. Reciprocating her lover's actions, Laura brought 
her mouth straight to Denise's hard button as well and latched onto it 
with no intention of ever letting go. Denise cried in ecstasy and 
continued her assault on Laura's clit.

Laura and Denise were working themselves up into a frenzy, pushing each 
other to go further and bring each other closer to orgasm. They were 
both moaning and crying loudly and their hips were bucking forcefully 
into each other's faces. They both knew that the other was close to 
cumming. Denise's cries suddenly became very loud and frequent and she 
grabbed Laura's body tightly. "Oh, fuck!" she cried. Then, Denise's body 
started thrashing about and she cried out, "I'm cumming! I'm cumming! 
I'm cumming!" Laura kept up her stimulation of Denise's clit and the 
brunette kept cumming powerfully, girl-juices dripping from her pussy 
all over her American lover's face.

Denise came down from her orgasm a minute later and Laura released her 
lover's throbbing clit from her mouth. "Now cum for me!" Denise demanded 
and she continued her abuse on Laura's clitoris. Laura screamed in 
ecstasy and started cumming powerfully as well. She held on to Denise's 
hips for dear life as the rest of her body spasmed out of control, 
girl-cum flowing from her cunt. Denise lapped up as much of Laura's 
cum-juices as she could, sighing in pleasure at the sweet taste.

Laura came down from her pleasure high after a minute and she let go of 
Denise's body. She sighed happily as her body settled down. Denise 
reversed herself again and the two women started kissing again. Denise 
moaned, sucking all of her own honey from Laura's lips. After several 
moments of making out, the two girls broke for air and looked at each 
other lustfully. "Shit!" said Denise. "Laura, when you cum, you really 
cum!"

Laura smiled and said, "You know better than anyone how to give me the 
best orgasms."

Denise got up and stood at the side of the bed. "Come on," she said, 
"let's get cleaned up. We don't want to smell like sex when we go on our 
expedition today." Denise started walking into the adjacent bathroom 
with her Laura following closely behind. Denise turned on the shower and 
tested the temperature to make sure it was warm enough. After a few 
seconds, the water warmed up and both women stepped in. After Denise had 
spent several seconds under the spray of the shower, she picked up a bar 
of soap and handed it to her blonde lover, saying, "Here. Clean my 
back." Laura took the bar of soap from the brunette and started 
lathering up Denise's back. Denise closed her eyes and sighed in 
pleasure as Laura massaged her back with the bar of soap. Laura moved up 
to Denise's neck and started massaging her shoulders. "Oh, Laura," 
Denise moaned. "That feels so good."

"Hey," Laura said, "I may be only a theologist but I know what feels 
good as well."

"I think you should be a massage therapist instead of a theologist."

"Oh, come on. Anyone can be a massage therapist. But being a 
twenty-two-year-old, world-renowned theologist, that's something you can 
be proud of."

"I suppose you're right." Denise turned around in Laura's arms and took 
the bar of soap from her. "Let me wash you," she said.

Laura got under the water and started getting herself ready to be 
cleaned. Denise lathered up Laura's back and the American woman sighed 
in much the same way Denise had. "You're not so bad at massaging 
either," said Laura.

"I know," the Briton said. "But, just like theology being your bag, 
archaeology is mine. No matter how good I am at massages, I am also 
proud of being a twenty-two-year-old, world-renowned archaeologist."

"Well, at least one person can enjoy a good massage from you." Denise 
kissed the back of Laura's neck, eliciting small moans from the blonde 
woman. However, just as Laura was settling into a trance-like state, she 
was suddenly snapped back to reality by someone's hand between her legs. 
"That's not what people normally do when giving a massage," she said.

"But it does feel good, doesn't it?" asked Denise.

"Yes, it does." Denise continued rubbing Laura's pussy with her left 
hand while she lathered up the American's breasts with her right hand. 
"You're in a frisky mood today, aren't you?" Laura breathed.

"Well, we are on the eve of one of the greatest archaeological and 
theological discoveries of mankind," Denise said. "Doesn't that make you 
excited?"

"Yes, it does," Laura moaned. Denise turned Laura around and pushed her 
against the wall of the shower and mashed her lips into Laura's, kissing 
just as aggressively as she had minutes before in bed, causing Laura to 
moan loudly. The brunette pushed her left hand against Laura's cunt and 
started rubbing Laura's hard clit. Laura gasped and her legs grew weak, 
causing her to slump to the ground against the wall. Denise followed 
Laura and continued stimulating her lover's sensitive clitoris. Laura 
brought her left hand to Denise's pussy as well and started fingering 
her hard button just as hard, causing the brunette to moan in pleasure 
as well.

Both women wrapped their right arms around each other as they kept their 
left hands between each other's legs. Even though they had already 
gotten wet from the shower, they could feel the juices that their 
vaginas were producing. As they continued fingering each other, Denise 
started humping Laura's fingers, thrusting her hips forward every time 
Laura pushed against her clit. Although it was difficult for Laura to 
move with the wall to her back and Denise to her front, her hips were 
still able to move in time to meet Denise's thrusts. The two women were 
still kissing, moaning into each other's mouths as they fucked each 
other hard.

Laura then decided to insert two of her fingers into her British lover's 
sopping vagina. Denise moaned as Laura entered her and she did the same 
to her blonde lover, causing Laura to moan as well. They both kept their 
thumbs working on each other's clits while they moved their index and 
middle fingers in and out of each other's wet canals. It was only as 
they neared their orgasms that their mouths parted, allowing them both 
to cry out in bliss as they brought each other to the edge of orgasm.

"Oh, yes!" Denise cried. "I'm gonna cum!" For a moment, Denise's body 
tensed up and she held her breath. Then, she cried out even louder than 
before and her body rocked against Laura's. She was cumming and cumming 
hard. Watching her lover orgasm pushed Laura over the edge and she cried 
out as well, her body shaking just as powerfully as Denise's was. They 
held onto each other's bodies, keeping each other in place as they 
continued fucking each other's contracting cunts, prolonging their 
orgasms for as long as possible. Cum-juices gushed from their pussies, 
filling the bathroom with the intoxicating scent of two very aroused 
females.

After what seemed like hours of orgasmic bliss, Laura and Denise came 
down from their climaxes and their bodies went limp. Laura enjoyed the 
feel of her recently pleasured lover lying on top of her. After spending 
several seconds recovering, Laura wrapped her arms around Denise's body 
and started kissing her brown-haired lover's lips. Denise emitted a 
small moan and started kissing Laura's lips as well. After several 
moments of kissing, Denise broke the kiss and smiled at Laura. "That was 
amazing," she said. "Thank you for that."

"Thank you too," said Laura. Denise's hazel eyes always looked so 
beautiful just after a powerful orgasm. After recovering for another 
minute or so, both women stood up, stepped back under the spray from the 
shower, and cleaned the sweat and girl-juices off of each other.

After their shower, Laura and Denise quickly dried off and started 
dressing. Denise got into a black bra and panties and Laura got into a 
blue bra and panties. They both had brought along green T-shirts and 
earth-toned shorts, which were quite thin in order to stay comfortable 
during the hot Egyptian summer. After having some breakfast at a 
restaurant nearby the hotel, they started on their way south toward the 
place that they believed to be the remains of the Temple of Apophis. 
Denise drove the truck while Laura navigated the rocky terrain with a 
map in her hands.

"So, Laura," Denise said, "I know that Apophis was an ancient Egyptian 
god. But what was he a god of?"

Laura, being the theologist of the expedition, answered without any 
doubt, "Apophis was the god of chaos. He was depicted as having the head 
of a cobra."

"The god of chaos," Denise said, sounding very interested.

"He was supposedly the nemesis of the sun-god, Ra. Every night, Apophis 
would kill Ra and Ra would wander the underworld at night while Apophis 
spread darkness throughout the land. However, every morning, Ra would 
come back to life and defeat Apophis with the help of the cat-goddess, 
Bast. The legend of Apophis is what makes this expedition so important. 
It's the first discovery of a place where people worshipped what could 
be the Devil of ancient Egypt."

"Satan worshippers," said Denise. "How interesting."

Although Laura was afraid of live snakes, she was just fine seeing dead 
snakes or depictions of snakes. Therefore, seeing a picture of a 
snake-headed man would be easy for her. When they arrived at the 
excavation site, there were several people waiting for Denise, who was 
the head of the whole project. "Hello," Denise said as she and Laura got 
out of the car. "I am sorry to keep you all waiting, but I had a few 
things to take care of before we left." Laura smiled at that statement. 
"As you know, this site is believed to be where the Temple of Apophis 
used to stand. Here, we have Laura Kinscher, a theologist that should be 
able to determine whether this is the Temple of Apophis."

"Hello, everyone," Laura said to the rest of Denise's party.

Denise continued. "Ladies and gentlemen, this is a great day in the 
history of mankind. It will be the first time that we have discovered a 
temple for worshipping an evil Egyptian god. It is very possible that 
this could shed light on the culture of ancient Egypt. Does anyone have 
any questions?"

"Yes," a Middle Eastern man said. "What do we make on this expedition?"

"What do you make? You mean how much are you payed?" The man nodded. "I 
can assure you that you all will be payed in full. Your efforts will not 
go unrewarded. Any other questions?"

"What can we expect to find down there?" asked an Australian woman with 
light brown hair.

"Probably nothing out of the ordinary. Possibly some offerings to the 
god Apophis, possibly the remains of several worshippers, probably 
nothing alive except for us. This temple has not been opened for 
thousands of years, so we shouldn't worry about any snakes or spiders. 
Is that all?" Nobody said anything. "Good. That means that we can start 
digging." With those words, the excavation began.

Several of the archaeologists ordered the diggers to where they should 
dig into the sand. Laura, being a theologist instead of an 
archaeologist, did not have anything to do until the temple was actually 
found. She simply watched intently as the site was being excavated. 
"This is so exciting!" Denise cried. "I'm going to be famous!"

"You?" Laura asked. "Don't you mean we?"

"What? Oh, yes. Of course. We will be famous. So, tell me Laura. Tell me 
more about this Bast character."

"Oh, Bast? Well, she was an ancient Egyptian goddess with the head of a 
cat. She was also the daughter of Ra, and was supposedly Ra's protector, 
as well as the protector of the Pharaoh. Some believed that she was also 
Ra's punisher, bringing sinners to justice."

"Ooh. I like her."

"She was wild and independent, much like you." Denise smiled proudly as 
if she was a deity. "Of course, she loved cats. She was also a goddess 
of women and of childbirth."

"A goddess of women. Was she a lesbian?"

Laura and Denise had a good laugh. "I don't know," Laura said as her 
laughter died out. "It's quite possible. Although, in many cultures that 
worship deities, all of the gods and goddesses are hetero. Although, I 
would be very interested to hear about a gay god. That would certainly 
give the theologists something to chew on for a while."

"Miss Cardinal!" the Middle Eastern archaeologist called. "Miss 
Cardinal!"

"What is it?" Denise asked, going to wear the archaeologist was 
standing.

"We found something, Miss Cardinal." Several of the diggers were in a 
hole that they had dug. At the bottom of the hole was the head of a 
statue of a cobra.

"Keep digging!" Denise demanded. "We're almost there!"

"What's going on?" Laura asked, running up to Denise.

"The diggers have found something."

"Oh, wow," said Laura. "It's a snake head. So our research is true. The 
Temple of Apophis actually exists!"

Several more hours of digging and a doorway was found leading 
underground with a statue of a cobra-headed man perched atop it, a 
statue of Apophis. "Ladies and gentlemen," Denise said proudly, "the 
Temple of Apophis has been opened. Shall we dare to take a peak inside?" 
Denise turned on an incandescent lamp and walked down to the door. After 
turning on several lamps of their own, Laura and and the other members 
of their party followed closely behind.

As the group walked down the steps behind the door, Laura said, "This is 
so exciting, Denise! We're actually exploring the Temple of Apophis!"

"Yes we are," said the Briton.

At the bottom of the steps was a large chamber. The walls were littered 
with hieroglyphics and in the center of the room was a large, circular 
altar. On the altar were several chests, pictures of snakes on sheets of 
papyrus, and several snake models made of stone. "This is where 
worshippers made their offerings to Apophis," said Laura. The blonde 
went to one of the inscriptions on the walls. She translated, "Here 
lives the great god, Apophis. May all who enter feel his power."

"Creepy," Denise said.

"Oh, my God!" Laura cried. "This actually happened?" Denise went to see 
what Laura was looking at. It was a picture showing the events that took 
place at several ceremonies. There was a fire at the altar. Worshippers 
were holding cats and casting them into the fire. "That's horrible!" 
cried Laura. "The poor cats."

"Why do you think worshippers of Apophis would burn cats?" Denise asked.

"Probably because of what cats represent. Remember what I told you about 
the cat-goddess Bast? How she defeated Apophis every morning so that Ra 
could brighten the day? Apophis worshippers would definitely dislike 
cats."

"That certainly does make sense." Denise looked at another inscription. 
"What does this say?"

Laura went to the inscription and translated, "May Apophis take the sky 
and rule what is his. May Ra wander the underworld for eternity."

"These people certainly didn't like Ra a lot, did they?" said Denise, 
amused by how the worshippers thought. "Laura," she said, looking at 
another picture, "look at this."

Laura went to the picture to examine it. It depicted a battle between a 
man with the head of a cobra and a woman with the head of a cat. Between 
the two figures were burning cats and the woman was being attacked and 
bitten by snakes. "It looks like a battle between Apophis and Bast," 
said the American woman. "Many Egyptians worshipped cats because they 
were so good at killing snakes, which they saw as spreading darkness. 
With the cats dead, Apophis has no trouble sending his minions to attack 
and kill Bast."

"Well, the sun still brightens the Egyptian sky. It seems that Apophis' 
plan failed."

Laura found an inscription below the picture. She said, "Apophis will 
soon rule all. This must be a depiction of what Apophis was planning to 
do, not what he had already done. As if his plan hadn't been put into 
motion yet."

Suddenly, there was a thump inside one of the chests on the altar. 
Everyone turned to the chest and illuminated it with their lamps. Laura 
slowly walked toward the chest. It thumped again. "What's going on?" she 
said. "Nothing has been down here for thousands of years." The chest 
thumped again. Slowly, Laura extended her hand and touched the chest. As 
her hand touched the chest, the thumping suddenly became continuous and 
violent. She pulled away quickly and the chest rolled over onto its 
side. The door to the chest flew open and snakes slithered out of it. 
"Snakes!" Laura cried in fright. "Get away! Get away!" she cried. She 
threw her lamp into the puddle of snakes that had formed, causing a 
shattering of glass and a small fire to start.

The other chests started thumping and more snakes came out of them as 
well! The archaeologists and diggers ran straight out of the chamber and 
back to the surface, frightened for their lives. Denise, too, ran up the 
steps. "Denise!" Laura cried. "Wait for me!" Laura looked for an open 
spot where she could get by the snakes. She found one and ran around the 
snakes, getting to the stairs.

Outside, Denise and the rest of the party were getting into their trucks 
and turning on the ignition. Laura got to the entrance. She was about to 
get to Denise's truck when she tripped on a rock. Loosing her footing, 
Laura landed on her right foot at a bad angle, twisting her ankle. She 
cried out in pain as Denise looked on. "Denise!" Laura cried. "Help me! 
Shit. I twisted my ankle!"

"I have all I need to present to the agency," said the brunette smugly.

Laura looked at Denise with a surprised, frightened, and desperate look 
on her face. "Denise? What are you saying?"

"It was fun while it lasted. But now that I've learned everything I need 
to know about Apophis and Bast, I see no reason to go on with you."

"Denise," Laura said. "Don't leave me here. Please. I love you."

"If it means anything to you," said Denise, "you were a great lover. I 
enjoyed all of the sex we had immensely." Obviously, Denise knew that 
saying what she said would only made things worse for Laura. The blonde 
now knew that ever since they were assigned to the same project six 
months before, Denise had been pumping her for information and using her 
for sex. Denise drove off after the rest of the party, leaving Laura 
behind.

Laura lay on the ground, alone and heart-broken with no easy way to get 
back to Cairo. She managed to stand up and start limping away. She 
thought that she had seen an oasis by the road on the way there. Laura 
started following the road back to Cairo, hoping that she had enough 
energy to make it to the oasis to get some water and fruit.

However, as she was walking, something bit her in the ankle that was not 
twisted. She fell to the ground and groaned in pain. She looked to see 
that it was a cobra that had bitten her. Suddenly, the pain from the 
bite multiplied a hundred times as the venom entered the wound. Laura 
screamed in agony as her body was overcome with searing pain. Laura hit 
the cobra several times until it detached itself from her leg. Laura 
stood up and limped as fast as she could away from the snake.

However, Laura did not get very far as her legs stopped responding to 
the signals that her brain was sending. 'Oh, no!' Laura thought. 'The 
venom!' She remembered that cobra venom paralyzed the victim's nervous 
system, causing many of the bodily functions to shut down, usually 
killing a human within 30 minutes. Laura's body was in pain and it was 
hard to breath. She fell to the ground, her legs no longer able to move. 
She looked back to see the cobra coming at her again. The blonde stared 
in fear, certain that she was going to die.

Suddenly, a figure jumped out from behind Laura and started attacking 
the deadly cobra. It was a human, but its movements were not like that 
of anybody Laura knew. It was unusually quick and agile. It yelled and 
growled at the snake in a voice that Laura identified as female. The 
human swiped at the snake with her hands and the snake dodged the girl's 
movements. After chasing the cobra around for another moment, the girl 
grabbed the snake by the neck, grabbed it by another section of its body 
several inches away and then bit into the part of the snake that was 
between her hands. The cobra's tail thrashed wildly, trying to escape 
from the girl's grip. As the girl's teeth dug into the serpent's flesh, 
its tail started moving more slowly and less violently. Another moment 
passed and the cobra stopped moving.

The girl dropped the dead snake and stood up. She then looked at Laura 
and rushed to her. She said something to Laura, but the blonde was no 
longer able to distinguish any words. The last thing that Laura saw 
before she lost consciousness was the girl's bright, green eyes looking 
upon her.

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To be continued...

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